Re recent edits
Generally, TYVM for proofing! However in this case...
Using Template:Generic|Narration Box instead of Template:Narrator was an editorial choice, which I stand by because I think it helps comprehension in transcript of the visual joke about thumping the box. I don't think the line about Noah looking at the box is clear enough on its own - I think it needs to be stated initially that the next appears on-panel in a box. Can we revert this please?
Using Directives within blank Noah lines, rather than Template:Narrative, was also an editorial choice, as it goes, though I don't feel so strongly about it now. But I think I was aware even back when I did this of the Narrator and Narrative options.Gympol (talk) 11:59, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
- Your argument for using Generic for the narration box make sense, though I'm not sure if it's necessary. However, I also prefer Narrative to Directive when describing something with no obvious connection to a line of dialogue. Lophotrochozoa (talk) 13:59, 15 February 2022 (UTC)